2 years ago in winter, when I was walking with my wife on a sidewalk in a small city which was famous for oysters, we found a restaurant that was located adjacent a fishing port. We were attracted to the nice smell that was from the baked oysters, and we entered this restaurant immediately.
There were a lot of tourists who came from other prefectures, and we had to wait in line for about 1 hour.
This restaurant was a little dirty, old, smoky, humidity and lovely.All ____ tables and chairs ______ made of wood, furthermore they were a little broken.A kettle put on the gas heater blew a small whistle which was like a bird song from the mountains.
One hour later, we could sit ____ the old chair and ordered 10 oysters and ____ small salad. After that we put 10 oysters on the grill that already was warmed by burning charcoal. The oysters that cooked on the charcoal grill were filled with their juice with nice smell and were very delicious and perfect.
We enjoyed our coincidence lunch and of curse this restaurant that gave us memorable memory was recorded in my favorite restaurant book.
-hyena
Dear Hyena,
Thank you for your post! It's beautiful :) Please note the following corrections:
1) words that are in the wrong form (noun, adjective, verb, etc) have been highlighted
2) places where a word is missing (article or preposition) have been underlined
3) words that are unnecessary have been bolded
4) constructions that are awkward have been italicized
This is a fantastic post Hyena! Well done :)
-Rumbly Tummy
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